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Lunegirl
Jan 02, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

cold cheeks.

salted tinsle tears
glass upon paled frost
stiff stretched smile, silent
— Lunegirl, Jan 02, 2010
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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Vicki

short but packing a punch I liked it ... it felt like a prelude ... to what ? is up to you lol loved it though love and hugs Jayne hope you had a wonderful xmas and new year
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Lunegirl

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks jayne, you always

Thanks jayne, you always have such nice things to say ; ) Im just practising, saying as much as i can with out using to many words. the haiku art isn't easy to me as i tend to write long sentaces! Hope you enjoyed your christmas and new year to love vix

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