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Do you want to come see?
Verse 1
Do you want to come see what its really like to be me?
Well you got to be locked in to see so you will never be free,
Do you still wont to be me?
Because your getting scared,
Having to be prepared for what your gona to see,
So your holding on tightly,
Cause you'll never be free,
Cause nobody hears my plea,
Cause ive been waiting fifteen years but they still cant see,
So who have i come to be?
Mentally depressed,
While im out kidnapping the rest,
So they get the chance to come and see me at my best,
And take the mental test that i face everyday,
So i get to find out the reson why i have to pay,
Why i have to stray,
So just lay and relax for a minute,
And put your mind up in it,
So you can enter my dreams,
But dont be scared,
No one can hear your screams,
Cause right now were fighting on the same team,
Fighting the same dream,
Hoping to live clean for one day,
And not see the sharp ray of my enemy,
And he can finally take the sin instead of me,
Thats right thats what he deserves,
But all you people dont no,
You sit back and observe,
Like youve never taken a curve in your life,
Thats nice you must of had a nice life,
But not now you got no sight,
So dont try to fight theres no point,
I'll make it loose for your joints to give you hope then tie you back up,
Feels like your giving up,
Well you never showed up,
so what am i supposed to do?
Let you free,
So you'll never get to feel me,
Feel my pain,
Well im the only one thats getting rained on by the same wrong,
The same song i keep singing,
I keep getting canned by the way that guy was living,
I could of put him in prison,
But because of my desision,
Everybodys in here,
Finally living my life,
Finally crying my tear,
So i should let you go,
Cause if i didnt you will be sitting on death row.
Verse 2
I just wont to apologize,
For putting you here and giving you my discize,
Its not lies,
Obviously its true,
Cause your running out of here,
Telling everybody your through,
And what to do?
Cause its a new feeling,
So your heart is steerring away form the crowd,
Its unbarring,
Never having the feeling of somebody not caring,
Looking at the pain your wearing,
Now your swearing at me,
Saying it wont be fixed,
Well at least it didnt start at the age of six,
So your lucky,
You really had it good,
Always hoping one day that i would,
That i should,
Finally be me,
Commited at the time when i could barely see,
When he stole the life off me,
How is that free,
Running now cause you offended me,
Without the judges plea,
So i must be nice,
But your sin comes at a price,
Including me,
Cause im not free im doing your time,
As i rewind the time,
And realize why im going blind.
Verse 3
So are you finally getting the picture?
The answers to your questions,
And did i mention that you can leave the cage,
Not being able to move because your heart is at rage,
As im turning the next page,
The journey in my book,
As i can see your hooked,
You cant move,
Wonting me to prove the innocence of the little girl,
Moving up quick in this big world,
Never knowing whats hitting me as my mind twirls,
My head swells,
As its getting bigger,
My action should have been quicker,
So im feeling sicker,
As my life goes,
I get old,
Knowing i cant free her now cause her body was froze,
At the price when she was sold,
Shes so cold,
Knowing all her life it wasnt the path she chose,
But the only path she knows only,
Knowing somone had stole me is hard,
Always wishing everyday for a different card.
Critiques
point.of.redemption
16 years 5 months ago
beautiful!
Silentvoice777
16 years 5 months ago
thx
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