DawningDaytripper

Jan 03, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

An old Neo recipe,

A Neo recipe,

Carrot,

string,

stick,

lead me from the dark

Kackle,

gufa,

hurumph...,

suggest a likly path

Review,

example,

thoughts,

whats the real deal

Tease,

appease,

please,

makin' it good fun

Laugh,

giggle,

cry,

repeat until satisfied

Julie

D.D.

— DawningDaytripper, Jan 03, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

Critiques

Lonnie

16 years 5 months ago

You brought a smile to me!

Nicely written humorous piece with much wisdom to boot! They say old recipes are always the best! Great job!

DawningDaytripper

16 years 5 months ago

Then my mission has been a

Then my mission has been a success Lonnie! A smile was what I was after! Thanks for the read! Julie D.D.

Orphani

16 years 5 months ago

very original and creative

very original and creative work Julie. You have a keen sense of fun which is essential to good poetry. Hope to get to more of your work soon.Barry ,,,o,,

DawningDaytripper

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks Barry, I don’t

Thanks Barry, I don't always think of humor as my best side, so that is quite the compliment and I am pleased. I will look forward to reading more of your work too! Julie D.D.

Brian Lucky

16 years 5 months ago

Hi DD. This poem is really attractive to me. Like art work, a lot of it can be attractive but the audience doesn't necessarily understand it. I'm trying to practice reading poetry and understanding it. I was wondering if you could give me an explanation on your poem. P.S. this is not an insult on your poetry. I actually am really interested in your writing. This is a tool for me. Thanks A lot, Brian Lucky

DawningDaytripper

16 years 5 months ago

Hi Brian, Glad you liked

Hi Brian, Glad you liked it, but I can't say I have any thing to impart with this one. I have been away from Neo alot latly. But this is the recipe for why I always come back. Hope that helps. I love questions, and rarely would take any offense. I have been known to be slightly offensive, in my attempt to convey honesty, but I think artists should be a little. LOL. Thanks for the read. Julie D.D.

Orphani

16 years 5 months ago

I agree wholhartedly.

I agree wholhartedly. Commenting is like raising kids though you have to use a gentle approach but honesty is key as I want to fnow what you really think. Thats why were here to grow as poets.To help each other grow.It not about putting any one down. Some people have very fragile egos . Its better to learn here, than to think unrealisticly about our need to improve.Barry ,,,o,,

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