In A Maze of Thorns

This is a very go, and very true poem!! It is wired, when I was 12 I draw a picture or a valley of thorns and just beond the thorns was a medow of flowers... I draw the pic for my mom, she was doing thought hard times and I gave it to her and said "You have to go thought the thorns to reach the flowers". You poem reminded me of that, and I thank you!! This is a great poem, you might consider adding puncsuation and all. For one poet to the next, ~Rain~

Very nice, Car. That was a great flow and feel not overdone, very entertaining. And so true, never is their gain with out a little pain! Julie D.D.

Hi there and it was good to talk with you live last night.Thank you for adding me as a buddy. This is a wonderful poem and so much of the Greek tale of the minotaur in the maze. It reminded me very much of that, but also the day to day life struggle of small pricks and large cuts...the good days and the bad days. The last two lines were excellent and I guess we all tramp through the weeds to get to the flowers... But remember weeds are plants growing where we do not want them to grow and it is also about control. I do think this one is my favourite so far but you write often so this might well change. Seabhac

I absolutely love this Poem. Great work Dani. : )

mmmmmm..i can feel pain... in your words, I like this part best... "The further I push the more I’m cut Yet knowing I must advance Must reach the door before its shut So I may have a chance" I did not make it to the door in time... But when ever a door ...is locked... Looking back... I see my self taking way too much time ... to go look for that open door... Peace ...LaTer8^)

Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.