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Running for a Cause

Commonly referred to, as a "rat-race"
we're the top candidates to be considered, "rats"...
because, we're the ones always running;

just don't ask me, why...either!
For, I may just end up on a wild tangent;
because, everybody knows..."rats" run on wheels.

Not wheels, as in the case of, skates...
although, the possibilities are rather staggering;
but, excercise wheels that don't travel anywhere.

I mean, let's face it...rats EXCERCISE
on these little wheels; but provided they don't fall,
nothing will end up changing for them.

See, I don't care what goes on in every body's head,
the "rat-race" will always try to pave the way home,
but, the progress will ALWAYS be compared to  the private wager made between friends.

I've stepped back, many a time,
but, I've always appreciated the final total
of the distance, when compared to the integrity of , "running in place"...

and, this time's no difference at all, my friend...
for there's one teeny, weeny, voice on the race-track...that matters,
and that's the voice, wondering as to the whereabouts of the "human race" !

There are small indications that we ARE rats.
So, we need to cease running in place...
and begin running to find ourselves.....and start running, for a real cause.....a cause that matters.
— docmaverick, Jan 08, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Doc......I agree with the substance of your write, ........

However I find solace in the fact that, yes, we are running...but if we stop running that's when I will begin to actually be concerned....for what lies therein for the "Rats" that are still???? food for thought? I believe so Dear Doc, thanks for the encouragement...that I am a runner!!!! Excellent Write though...
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 5 months ago

Yes, Antoinette....

...I believe that you ARE a runner. Just don't "run" out of reasons to keep "running", ya know? Thanks for your comments. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

I hate Running.

Lots of logic and truth to what you have written, Doc. Unusual conclusion from your dream but an interesting one. Well written and take care. Love from Lyz. I would hate to come across any rat sack, it is lunchtime here. Smile. Lol. XX
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 5 months ago

As always, Lyz....

...you are greatly appreciated. Thanks for reading and commenting. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

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