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Jan 08, 2010
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Running for a Cause
Commonly referred to, as a "rat-race"
we're the top candidates to be considered, "rats"...
because, we're the ones always running;
just don't ask me, why...either!
For, I may just end up on a wild tangent;
because, everybody knows..."rats" run on wheels.
Not wheels, as in the case of, skates...
although, the possibilities are rather staggering;
but, excercise wheels that don't travel anywhere.
I mean, let's face it...rats EXCERCISE
on these little wheels; but provided they don't fall,
nothing will end up changing for them.
See, I don't care what goes on in every body's head,
the "rat-race" will always try to pave the way home,
but, the progress will ALWAYS be compared to the private wager made between friends.
I've stepped back, many a time,
but, I've always appreciated the final total
of the distance, when compared to the integrity of , "running in place"...
and, this time's no difference at all, my friend...
for there's one teeny, weeny, voice on the race-track...that matters,
and that's the voice, wondering as to the whereabouts of the "human race" !
There are small indications that we ARE rats.
So, we need to cease running in place...
and begin running to find ourselves.....and start running, for a real cause.....a cause that matters.
we're the top candidates to be considered, "rats"...
because, we're the ones always running;
just don't ask me, why...either!
For, I may just end up on a wild tangent;
because, everybody knows..."rats" run on wheels.
Not wheels, as in the case of, skates...
although, the possibilities are rather staggering;
but, excercise wheels that don't travel anywhere.
I mean, let's face it...rats EXCERCISE
on these little wheels; but provided they don't fall,
nothing will end up changing for them.
See, I don't care what goes on in every body's head,
the "rat-race" will always try to pave the way home,
but, the progress will ALWAYS be compared to the private wager made between friends.
I've stepped back, many a time,
but, I've always appreciated the final total
of the distance, when compared to the integrity of , "running in place"...
and, this time's no difference at all, my friend...
for there's one teeny, weeny, voice on the race-track...that matters,
and that's the voice, wondering as to the whereabouts of the "human race" !
There are small indications that we ARE rats.
So, we need to cease running in place...
and begin running to find ourselves.....and start running, for a real cause.....a cause that matters.
— docmaverick, Jan 08, 2010
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Antoinette Mar…
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Doc......I agree with the substance of your write, ........
docmaverick
16 years 5 months ago
Yes, Antoinette....
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
I hate Running.
docmaverick
16 years 5 months ago
As always, Lyz....
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