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Jan 08, 2010
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Monster
Hear my words
and run away
don't trust the shadows
and never stray
The monster will take you up
and make you his toy
a mindless puppet
and never again will you fill joy
He will tell you he can help you
and make your spirit soar
don't go into his house
your trapped when he shuts the door
Don't let him tell you he's the answer
he is satin in every form
don't trust the lies that he will tell
for then he will unleash a storm
Don't let him pull you under
there's no hero once you die
just keep away from the monster
and don't believe his lie
and run away
don't trust the shadows
and never stray
The monster will take you up
and make you his toy
a mindless puppet
and never again will you fill joy
He will tell you he can help you
and make your spirit soar
don't go into his house
your trapped when he shuts the door
Don't let him tell you he's the answer
he is satin in every form
don't trust the lies that he will tell
for then he will unleash a storm
Don't let him pull you under
there's no hero once you die
just keep away from the monster
and don't believe his lie
— Silent_Rain, Jan 08, 2010
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U K Atiyodi
16 years 5 months ago
Monster
Silent_Rain
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks for commenting! ~Rain~
Silent_Rain
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks, Indi! Im glad that
Dark_Death
16 years 5 months ago
i like it, reminds me of a
Silent_Rain
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks...
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