Heavenly Miracles

Carchuleto, I like the idea of shy miracles. I like your suggestion that miracles may need to be sought if we are to realize them. The first stanza starts off well but I question how a salamandrine sky is shy. Your rhyme scheme is good and I like the sensitivity of this poem. I think the poem would be best served by the title if you left off ",You!" I think if you do, the reader will be left to anticipate the miracle, rather than knowing it right off. I look forward to reading more. Thank you, Lisa

What a nice poem this afternoon Carch. I think it was good and agree with lml in what she said. Goood work though and keep warm..This Florida weather is crazy..and I am going to my 35th class renunion tonight ..ughhh supposed to be in the 20's here in Florida, unreal and heater in house broke. Got the stove going and little heaters and of course the fire pit outside!! Miss talking to you and see you in neo cafe real soon.. Got the coffee pot going all day!! LOL love, magics02 xxoxoxooxo

Very cool, and true ! Nice rhythm Car. The italics are well put . . . I like. Mark "some things change, some things do not"

True, Car, nice reading, smooth rhythm. The italics are well placed. This is a feel good poem :) The word misconstrued seems out of place for me as my eyes hung on it, can't help right now though. truly, Mark "some things change, some things do not" (if this is a multi post sorry the server ate my first)