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Old Fashioned Fixtures

The old fashioned fixtures on the pedestal sink, 
candle chandeliers rusted from
all these years
 

and the spirits, blood smeared,
scream.  
 

Spellbinding the lantern lights by moon grace
strange stars on the wall are not stars at all
but like shattered stain glass, inverted demon signs
 

prickling skin, crawling breath of some haunted
demise.
 

Something bittersweet lives here; she screams the
agonic torture of blood stains and blades, she is only
as alive as the darkness.  
 
Running through the night, collapsed on stone floors,
alone.
 

Ancient tools of torture, the strappados, bone crushers
and guillotines. Silent suffocation wills whims of ghosts
glistening blades used, given life through death.
 

Lost in trickles of blood on the wall, shadows screeching
writhing.
 

Some breath heaving down the hall, final gasps of her. Hands
on stone, scratching until her fingers are crimson bones,
nails torn off, one last breath
 

until these skeletons of tortured souls are nothing but old fashioned
fixtures hanging from the ceiling.

— Morgana Tragic Proprietress, Jan 12, 2010

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Region, Country: Somewhere Past Nevermore, CAN

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Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks Indi!!!! Haven’t

Thanks Indi!!!! Haven't written a dark one in a while, felt great. Peace
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Now that is...

More like it! " Some breath heaving down the hall, final gasps of her. Hands on stone, scratching until her fingers are crimson bones, nails torn off, one last breath. Wow! You been taking lessons from Killer? Great stuff! More! ~ Gee
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 5 months ago

Actually, Morgana made an

Actually, Morgana made an appearance tonight by some random happening. LOL glad she did though, this felt good to write. Thanks Gee. Peace
WF

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 5 months ago

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!

Oh my god.... is it safe to come out???????? No is it, really? You're not the killer are you? Haven't got a machete lurking in your back pocket have you? NO??! Phew! Instead you have shoved a grenade in my mouth and pulled the pin otu... and boom, the imagination has exploded, shrapnelising my cortex and has me cowering at even the most friendly shadows! This is a gripping chiller thriller that has some superb descriptives and draws you in, finger nail marking the computer desk whilst you're at it, and leaves you yelling and screaming like a gibbering blonde village idiot (I do a testimony to that as I already hold that title here in england :) that boogieman is gonna getcha, ooppps sorry that is bogieman or bogiewoman or the PC bogieperson... either way I'll let you get jiggy with the bloodletters! Either way Imma getting out of here before you introduce me to Mr Bowie Knife! Great write indeed.. you need to write a murder mystery novel know, you'd be great at it! Dale :)
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 5 months ago

LOL Dale oh you make my day

LOL Dale oh you make my day dude. LOL This was inspired by a title a friend of mine gave me after I finished watching a reality ghost show and I was in a complete dark mindframe of writing. And I'd love to write a murder mystery novel, on the list of things I wanna do one day. Thanks Peace~~~
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Dark_Death

16 years 5 months ago

O.O

dang i dont even know what to say.... i liked it alot o.o imma probably come back and read this a cupple more times rofl
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 5 months ago

Good old fashioned write

Good old fashioned write Katie, or should I call you Morgana, or shall it be Sis! hehe I loved it. Old charm and blood. GREAT mixture! I love how you format and tell a story to. Loved the read. Thanks for sharing! Julie D.D.
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Lunegirl

16 years 5 months ago

wow i shant fear to write

wow i shant fear to write dark again after this, I loved the ''only as alive as the darkness'' and the ''crimson bones'' lines. wicked horror read vicki ; )
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Morgana

Congratulations on spot and scaring the shit outta me I will never look at my old sink the same again lol love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 5 months ago

LOL thanks everyone. Poor

LOL thanks everyone. Poor Seren. Sinks shall scare you the way fuzzy TVs do me...(never watching the Ring again...) Peace
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

have you seen white noise

have you seen white noise one and two? if you were scared after the ring ...well I will see if you have seen them or not and the people that 'live' in the TV lol I dont like fuzzy telly either creeps me out ... love and mountains of hugs *s* Jayne-Chloe x x x
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 5 months ago

No I haven’t….and by the

No I haven't....and by the tone of your words I don't think I want to...LOL Fuzzy TVs especially when they come on by themselves scare the shit outta me. Freaky stuff. It's happened to me. *shudder* Peace
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

White Noise ia all about

White Noise ia all about fuzzy telly lol and what lives in the fuzz wont say too much lol I dont want to spoil it lol ... I loved both the movies but if you are phobic I wouldnt recommend you watch they are chilling to say the least .. Michael Keaton is in the first one and the second one (that isnt that old) stars Katee Sackhoff(battlestar galactica) and nathan fillion(slither and serenity) ;) funny thing happened here last night lights started turning themselves off lol weird shit love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Rett

Rett

16 years 5 months ago

Daughter

This is fabulous, but you have to stop watching those haunted prison shows. *LOL* Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 4 months ago

Hehehe thanks all…yeah I

Hehehe thanks all...yeah I really should stay away from ghost shows....hahah not likely to happen. Peace n ghosts (lol!!!)

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