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Old Fashioned Fixtures
The old fashioned fixtures on the pedestal sink,
candle chandeliers rusted from
all these years
and the spirits, blood smeared,
scream.
Spellbinding the lantern lights by moon grace
strange stars on the wall are not stars at all
but like shattered stain glass, inverted demon signs
prickling skin, crawling breath of some haunted
demise.
Something bittersweet lives here; she screams the
agonic torture of blood stains and blades, she is only
as alive as the darkness.
Running through the night, collapsed on stone floors,
alone.
Ancient tools of torture, the strappados, bone crushers
and guillotines. Silent suffocation wills whims of ghosts
glistening blades used, given life through death.
Lost in trickles of blood on the wall, shadows screeching
writhing.
Some breath heaving down the hall, final gasps of her. Hands
on stone, scratching until her fingers are crimson bones,
nails torn off, one last breath
until these skeletons of tortured souls are nothing but old fashioned
fixtures hanging from the ceiling.
Critiques
Morgana Tragic…
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks Indi!!!! Haven’t
Geezer
16 years 5 months ago
Now that is...
Morgana Tragic…
16 years 5 months ago
Actually, Morgana made an
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 5 months ago
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Morgana Tragic…
16 years 5 months ago
LOL Dale oh you make my day
Dark_Death
16 years 5 months ago
O.O
Morgana Tragic…
16 years 5 months ago
LOL thanks Dark. Peace
DawningDaytripper
16 years 5 months ago
Good old fashioned write
Lunegirl
16 years 5 months ago
wow i shant fear to write
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Morgana
Morgana Tragic…
16 years 5 months ago
LOL thanks everyone. Poor
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
have you seen white noise
Morgana Tragic…
16 years 5 months ago
No I haven’t….and by the
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
White Noise ia all about
Rett
16 years 5 months ago
Daughter
Ink Dragon
16 years 4 months ago
My little sis and ghost stories, what a combo!
Morgana Tragic…
16 years 4 months ago
Hehehe thanks all…yeah I
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