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Jan 13, 2010
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What of Infidelity
What of Infidelity
A moment’s infidelity
A life time’s torture
Any human beings’
mind can go astray
At any time
of any day
At any hour
Any moment
by false sense
of display
On someone else’s behalf
We foreplay
Come some one
Please do come by
and
there you go flat
on the sly,
afterwards
it is like just that
You loved to lie
on the mat
That is all
twas to it
We both enjoyed it
Bit by bit
bit by bit
bit by bit
didn't we!!!
— loved, Jan 13, 2010
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Bonitaj
16 years 5 months ago
Interestingly accurate
loved
16 years 5 months ago
observation
loved
16 years 5 months ago
five stars
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Loved
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thabks
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
very nice Loved!
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