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Forgotten angel

Come to me,
My forgotten angel,
And bestow upon me,
A kiss,
Your lips shall taste,
Of unplumed tombs,
And your tounge
Of rotten fruit,
Wrap me in,
Your dire embrace,
And fill me,
With the piosens,
Of the world,
Your touch is like,
A razos caress,
Sharp,
And full of pain,
But as often,
As you cut me,
I pray for it,
Again and again.
— Dark.Poetress, Jan 20, 2010

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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

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tongue and poison mispelled other than that a good poem here. Angel woman Mona

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