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Geremia
Geremia
Jan 23, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

TO MY LADIES FAIR

TO MY LADIES FAIR I see you beyondIn soft and  gentle lightCalling meThose moments I despair.I see you watching meWhen I fall in body and soulAndBeg me to get up againI do. You see beyond my male bravadoBeyond the masks I wearYou see the boy of threeSitting in the shadeOf an umbrella tree.Wondering. You are my lades f airMy Annas threeMy Lyz and    Jayne –ChloeMy NinaAnd you allWho lovingly and patientlySeeAnd understand       
— Geremia, Jan 23, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Dear Joe

(((((((((((Huggles))))))))) and thank you *Big Smile*your a wonderful friend your courage and it is courage dont mistake it ... is more help to me than you could ever know love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 4 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank YOU,

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank YOU, my Jayne. "While I still belong to me And My mind is clear and free I will sing my songs With truth nd beauty Infinity Can wait" Love from Joe
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

This morning I have buckets

This morning I have buckets of tears to release. Some will be reading others' poems such as this one my precious Longo, more will be released in poems I write. To be a hero of one's own life is to live its preciousness when all seems too painful to bear. Only love sees and feels. ~Anna "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
M

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Gracious poem Longo

What a lovely poem you write of the fair ladies here. All of your poetry is very nice Longo and touching. In the same sense it all tells such a beautiful story, kind of like a memoir. Am I right Longo? Hoping this email finds you less pain today and much comfort. Blessings Mona
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Oh and here is me, I have

Oh and here is me, I have tears in my eyes I cannot see, oh deary me, it has moved me too miuch I have no words they escpae me, we are honoured by your trust in us and for your good self wish no more than to give of our love to you and help all we can. onlyAnn. Yes and good for dear Jayne you help us too to understand life better too.

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