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seabhac
seabhac
Jan 27, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Florist






                                             Fed growth of rose
                                             Flower not as nature is
                                             Decapitated
— seabhac, Jan 27, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

I'm left wondering

Is this about a life nurtured then abandoned? Rosina
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 4 months ago

Hi Rosina

Sorry missed this This was play It is about a florist who hated to see roses unnaturally fed and grown and then when they came to her after all that effort she cut their heads off to arrange them for the public...she couldn't stand the imbalance any longer and changed her job...stronge stuff in a 'mini' form. Good alternative thought for Valentines day comming up... Seabhac

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