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Jan 30, 2010
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Ignorance
war
creating something major
its simplistic yet destroys
like a general in danger
screaing at his men to deploy
his voice raised with anger
he could hear the voice of every boy
every marine, naval officer and ranger
knowing the battle that lay ahead would take joy
and lives of these emotionless behaviours
molded like a toy
for us to endanger
it doesnt matter how many are destroyed
as long as theyre a stranger
the ones who live will rejoy
but all of them owe me a favour
many will lay screaming noise
but hopefully less is our saviour
alota the vilence makes me annoyed
but as long as its not fought by my neighbors
creating something major
its simplistic yet destroys
like a general in danger
screaing at his men to deploy
his voice raised with anger
he could hear the voice of every boy
every marine, naval officer and ranger
knowing the battle that lay ahead would take joy
and lives of these emotionless behaviours
molded like a toy
for us to endanger
it doesnt matter how many are destroyed
as long as theyre a stranger
the ones who live will rejoy
but all of them owe me a favour
many will lay screaming noise
but hopefully less is our saviour
alota the vilence makes me annoyed
but as long as its not fought by my neighbors
— mdehe, Jan 30, 2010
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weirdelf
16 years 3 months ago
I seem to recall giving you some hell on some other poem
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