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Devil's Friends


Terroist's
 subjects of the devil
obeying  his  cruel and evil ways
their hands
washed in blood
from innocent people
of whom they have murdered
man, woman and child
it doesn't matter
they have killed them all
their minds twisted with  the insanity
of hate
these  terroists  cannot be called human
for they have no respect for mankind
these  are monsters from hell
who  show no remorse
as they tear family and friends apart
their theme is of destruction
their god is the devil




— karen, Feb 01, 2010

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Country/Region: GBR

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yenti

yenti

16 years 3 months ago

Karen

This piece of writing is nearly a poetic way of seeing the horror of terrorists, so it has been said, now let them answer to their God, I have been in areas where there have been people fighting for their own rights and fight they do, then there are people that Brainwash others to do their dirty work with promises to them of a wonderful afterlife, this is the way of the world, I look forward to reading some of your other works, Yours Ian.T
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 1 month ago

Karen

To start I must say this is a subject close to my heart. The words placed are not to run from a toung yet in my mind they are keeping my eyes to the screen. Some people are to be of the mindset that all soldiers are terroist. I laugh and I cry I remember things I should have forgotten . Well this square peg pounded into a round hole will be whatever is of need at the time and place my country asks. I leave you with this am I different for the reason of the place on earth I was born? Or for the reason I stand for what I believe is correct and just. Somthing to ponder on don't you think. Steven A. Kacer

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