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loved
loved
Feb 03, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My aging skin

 

My Aging Skin

 

You take my wrinkles away

 

I shall never fade that way,

 

And when I do come,

 

If ever I do ,

 

Your way ,

 

Then alone I shall pay

 

Till then be happy and pray

 

 

 

 

 

— loved, Feb 03, 2010

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yenti

yenti

16 years 3 months ago

Loved

It is the inside of you that will out last that wrinkled skin and you will find as the wrinkles are no more, that unconditional love, will flow over you, there are no worries of this frail form we seem to want to make false, it is but a vessel; of a love that is eternal, Yours Ian.T
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

my thanks

thank u ever so much for ur lovely thoughts so wonderfully conveyed rgds loved

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