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Its name

Dark wings beating black as night,
Keeping time its alarmingly bright,
It hovers above our heads,
And fills them with silly dreads,
Its name brings a tear,
Because its name is fear.

                                     Poet_Laurete
— Dark.Poetress, Feb 03, 2010

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Lonnie

16 years 3 months ago

Nicely done!

This is the second poem I've read by you and although I liked the first one better, this is still a good read! Keep up the great work, I really like your style!

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