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Feb 08, 2010
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Daughter of the sea
Daughter of the Sea Whispering wind though the ages Crushing his heart with cruel determination His eyes lay upon hands of old As the emptiness began to fill his soul Try as he may He could not fill the void Of the lost love of yesterday That which looms in dismay Hair of gold and skin as ivory Eyes as sapphires and checks of strawberries A voice as lovely as a harp of an angel A lost father’s treasure of all the ages As she stood upon the cliffOver looking the worldHer Tears began to emergeDeep from withinRolling down from her faceThey flowed with such force Like a river untamedA wave like no other Memories of yesterday came rushing within Deep in her mind, where her father had beenA man of compassion and honor was heFilled with love and admiration Who sailed the high sea He left so long ago To fight a war so far awayNo letters received Which to confirm his fateJust the years of agony of Wondering what might of took placeThe pain and toil had took their tollRendering a child without hope for tomorrow Her mind in fixation, Her heart pounding madSearching for something She once had Holding her hands out,As if to flyWondering “Oh why must he had to die” She flew from the cliff Unto the sea down belowHer heart rendered to itAs it took her within Away in the distance A ship came into sight With its sails set high For his daughters delight Her father was at home to where He knew he should be With men worn and tired And their hearts filled with joyFor battle was over and Finally set free. Now standing upon the cliff Where his daughter once stood A father cries out deep within his soul For the years that have past That he could not see, For his little lone Angel Lost to the sea By: Wayne Allen Wadsworth
— ucon27, Feb 08, 2010
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greeneyes
16 years 4 months ago
wow wow wow
indira
16 years 4 months ago
pathetically lyrical…kudos!
xena465
16 years 4 months ago
Just lovely...
ucon27
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Happy Valentines
DawningDaytripper
16 years 4 months ago
Darn fine work Wayne, I do
ucon27
16 years 4 months ago
thank you:)
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