Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

U

The Unwedded Widow

  The Unwedded Widow The freezing rain Fell upon her face As she stood alone Ageist the world around Thinking of the oneWhom she never had met  Ravished and torn away,  Silence looming deep inside Concealing memories, Which haunted her mind Looking down upon The gravestone below, Thoughts of the fallen Flashed within her mindSearching for a young man She had never even known A voice filled her head, And whispered inside, This must be he, For I knew not his name Nor I knew not of his deeds But he lay’s right before me,  A mighty marine As she stood there to morn, She viewed all a round, Not a single person was there To grieve upon this ground They lay here to rest Within this beautiful field, Brave men and women Who gave up their lives So that I would be, free  She knows some where out On the battlefield he still looms Hoping that one day He will be home soon.  By: Wayne Allen Wadsworth
— ucon27, Feb 09, 2010

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

More from this author

Critiques

xena465

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

Who's the unwed...

I love this poem but I'm a little confused. Did the unwedded widow lose someone in battle or was she writing to someone she didn't know who died? Rosina xena465
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 4 months ago

I got it Wayne, A lonely

I got it Wayne, A lonely women, mouring a Marine she never met. But she can see him and knows what they missed. The sacrifice they both made for us all. And there is no one to mourn but the wife he never knew! EXCELLENT WRITE WAYNE!! Julie D.D.

Join Neopoet to leave a critique

Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.