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Feb 10, 2010
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willow
wrapped in your perfect arms
pressed to your parted lips
flung up flown in
spread wide and pinned
mortar for my soul
soporific wing in gentle night
owl and cave
find myself within your gaze
found anew
fresh with birth-gloss
pressed to your parted lips
flung up flown in
spread wide and pinned
mortar for my soul
soporific wing in gentle night
owl and cave
find myself within your gaze
found anew
fresh with birth-gloss
— talkingcat, Feb 10, 2010
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DawningDaytripper
16 years 4 months ago
I loved your phrasing with
talkingcat
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks for your comments,
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