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Feb 12, 2010
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Nowhere In Sight
Darkness falls upon this place,
Where devils and demons fall from grace.
Torturing souls for their delight,
Dancing around the candlelight.
They whisper things into our ears,
While preying on our deepest fears.
And so it is on this night,
The demons are felt, but nowhere in sight!
Tearing down the walls we've built,
Protecting us from our sin and guilt.
Without a place for us to hide,
The demons are able to get inside.
Souls are all they crave and devour,
Feeding on us gives them more power.
So this is their night,
Filled with much fright!
Feeling them strong,
but nowhere in sight!
Where devils and demons fall from grace.
Torturing souls for their delight,
Dancing around the candlelight.
They whisper things into our ears,
While preying on our deepest fears.
And so it is on this night,
The demons are felt, but nowhere in sight!
Tearing down the walls we've built,
Protecting us from our sin and guilt.
Without a place for us to hide,
The demons are able to get inside.
Souls are all they crave and devour,
Feeding on us gives them more power.
So this is their night,
Filled with much fright!
Feeling them strong,
but nowhere in sight!
— nunofyorbiznis, Feb 12, 2010
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hugo la rosa
16 years 4 months ago
Dear nunofyorbiznis:
nunofyorbiznis
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you for your kind
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Great first post
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