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it is still dark outside with morning

yesterday
two all-natural green peas fell under my mother's dining room
table
rested in the center of the all-wool burgundy weave,
birthed by unknown hands somewhere
in India or perhaps China, the tag of origin
long gone

a tapestry is brewing, I smell its sediments:
obsidian snowflakes inside, opals of fire outside,
an omen to Gunga Din's last brigade, pearls to swine,
swine to a lost island, island to sky, sky to the almighty
garbage decay of life, flashes of insight break down
like Strontium, silver-white or yellowish-gold
life, however, is not alkaline
its acid rubs you raw and the skin peels away
sweet the bone

you are robbed by theives and disrobed by angels

tap. tap-- to a distant drum
rattle rattle, fear is a dancing bear
scraping a branch against the window
heroes are a dime a dozen, how much is a medal worth?

between closed hands and clenched mouth
the dead can dance, ancient parchment, yellowing
the soul is a wasteland
cast the dice,
snake eyes every time

a solitary bugle calls Reveille on one side
plays Taps on the other.

morning comes bright and bold, dark and
full.


~A
_________________
"As the eagle was killed by the arrow winged with his own feather, so the hand of the world is wounded by its own skill." ~ Helen Keller
— Kailashana, Feb 14, 2010

Critiques

Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Jesus mother of mary I dont

Jesus mother of mary I dont have any words you leave me wordless ... read my next write and youll understand why ... cut from the same cloth Love Jayne-Chloe
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Imagination...

is a wonderful gift and you sure got it. Brilliant Rosina xena465
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Oh you are drole dearest Anna

Ann of Norway There they lie two green peas, two edible green peas, two peas of history, two carpet baggers belongings, two eastern dangled berries, two squinting pearls, two wind dried balls, two evilly yellowish faded emeralds, two soured green bombs, two angels rattles, two numbers unsung, two scratches on the window, two dew drops in the wood glaring, two morning glories about to transform. BUT I give you more than TWO stars my lovely, no beautifully absurd and wonderfully poetic sister Anna from the other Anna with my love.

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