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Sickly Flowers (Maybe a Different Day)

I always hated this day
of over gracious love
epic proportions of sickly romantics.
I know just how to fake the truth,  
how to look away when you walk by with her.
There are rules and I break them every time
like some pirate hearted dweller.  
You pulled me close once
as the night faded...
but that’s a story too rich in glory
for this poem.

I hate the sickly pink flowers and petals
that sweep to dusty tabletops,  
loathe the glimmer in lover’s eyes,
the songs that play on all day.  
There’s a rhythm in the darkness,
there’s a beat in a poet’s words;
couldn’t tell you what I wanted to.  
I know how this works all the same.  
It’s making something from nothing
drawing the romantic in me without trying.
You did it once
but that’s a silly cliché
for another day.  
 
I lied when I said it never did bother me,  
one more rebel minded reply,
ten steps from the truth.
I know how to tell you what’s on my mind
and never what’s in the heart.  
Time flies and words slip by
I know just how to keep them inside.
I don’t know how you know it anyways,
how your eyes stray my way.  
I love the rain, the way it falls down windows
love running through puddles in the streets
and I would love to pull you close
as the night fades...
but really, that’s a story and a cliché
for maybe a different day.

 

— Morgana Tragic Proprietress, Feb 14, 2010

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Region, Country: Somewhere Past Nevermore, CAN

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Stefan

16 years 3 months ago

Hi

wow, don't we all walk this path of love and hate. well written........you draw a picture in my mind..........well done
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 3 months ago

Applause. A VD poem after me own heart.

Remember what VD used to stand for? Hint, it's not Subscriber Trunk Dialling. Now why is this as long as others but doesn't feel wordy? mmm, bears some thought. Perhaps because the sense of narrative is strong and the structure of the end lines of verses carries it so well. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Great...

I like the way it flows. Rosina xena465
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks every one!!!!

Thanks every one!!!! Appreciate the comments and thanks for reading. Peace
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Heartfelt. ‘I know how to

Heartfelt. 'I know how to tell you what’s on my mind and never what’s in the heart.' - isn't that how most of us are? I like the way you use the last two lines of each verse. LOve Judy
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goatman

16 years 3 months ago

sickly unromantic

maybe I just can't appreciate the glory in this poem. this poem felt like a bit of a winge, and a childish one at that too. love is tricky one and so is teenhood, but I think patience is the key to both, not idealism or a general negative attitude to the whole object 'love'/'teenhood'. that comes from personal experience, 'cause after all I am only sixteen. xx
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks for the honesty,

Thanks for the honesty, appreciate it. Everyone has their opinions and I respect that. Peace

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