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Feb 16, 2010
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Love and Lust
A soft sigh
after a lingering kiss
as your hands trace desire
along the bare skin on my back
my heart pounds in my chest
as I gaze into your blue gray eyes
a tingling trail
is left from your finger
lightly dancing on my neck
and in my hair
I hold you close
Oh so close
not wanting to let go
never wanting to let go
but I must
With one last kiss
deep and lust-filled
I must leave you
for just a little while
They say love is a lie
for those that are young
that your "Love"
is nothing but lust
but what they don't see
is that love comes from lust...
after a lingering kiss
as your hands trace desire
along the bare skin on my back
my heart pounds in my chest
as I gaze into your blue gray eyes
a tingling trail
is left from your finger
lightly dancing on my neck
and in my hair
I hold you close
Oh so close
not wanting to let go
never wanting to let go
but I must
With one last kiss
deep and lust-filled
I must leave you
for just a little while
They say love is a lie
for those that are young
that your "Love"
is nothing but lust
but what they don't see
is that love comes from lust...
— Silent_Rain, Feb 16, 2010
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Critiques
arja
16 years 3 months ago
L5:”my heart pounds in my
arja
16 years 3 months ago
..i almost forgot the stars,
Silent_Rain
16 years 3 months ago
Lolz!!
broken_skye
16 years 3 months ago
Bravo
Silent_Rain
16 years 3 months ago
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