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Feb 17, 2010
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mistek3z r mAiD
i can right and thats jus meh
i luv the winter
my face lights down
not me here dis crazy earth
i makes no cents
what im am saying?
i speaks so louldly
i rock wet musikz
weed dis poem again and u get me
misteks ar mad tu fex
go fegure
i half no rythm
i can't spell SDRAWKCAB
turn it around
u turn all the way
all dis time eye tie to point out
drink i am
and drug do think!!!
HaAHaA well??
^^ZOMBIE^^
i luv the winter
my face lights down
not me here dis crazy earth
i makes no cents
what im am saying?
i speaks so louldly
i rock wet musikz
weed dis poem again and u get me
misteks ar mad tu fex
go fegure
i half no rythm
i can't spell SDRAWKCAB
turn it around
u turn all the way
all dis time eye tie to point out
drink i am
and drug do think!!!
HaAHaA well??
^^ZOMBIE^^
— zombie, Feb 17, 2010
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
the topics ok but the
the_fool
16 years 3 months ago
umm, yea...
zombie
16 years 3 months ago
well...
sutton
16 years 1 month ago
I like
zombie
16 years ago
well thanks a lot
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