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michaelfirewalker
Feb 17, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Done

 

gotta fight

just to be

bitch never

lets me stop

gonna knock

up destiny

rip the clock

off eternity

get it off

set it free

then let me off

 

 

 

 

— michaelfirewalker, Feb 17, 2010

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michaelfirewalker

16 years 3 months ago

Done

thanks, Richard...glad you think so.....................michael
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Is this Mikey ??? from the

Is this Mikey ??? from the other place lol wonderful short poem direct and to the point :) smiles love Jayne-Chloe x x x
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michaelfirewalker

16 years 3 months ago

Done

heyyyyy, Jayne-Chloe...yeah...it's me...like it here too...just not enough time, ya know?...thanks, glad you liked this little one.....................michael
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Yo, Mikey, get off my cloud,

Yo, Mikey, get off my cloud, oh, yeah! A little bit of Satchmo, please! ~A "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." ~ Paul Valery

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