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Feb 17, 2010
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getting looks
nude lipstick lips tight
shopping bags of self-consciousness
young girl public property
used to eyes
but doesnt know its only window shopping
the eyes dont care
she is a moveable feast
dont get used to it
better build in brick
and be valued for your inner architecture
shopping bags of self-consciousness
young girl public property
used to eyes
but doesnt know its only window shopping
the eyes dont care
she is a moveable feast
dont get used to it
better build in brick
and be valued for your inner architecture
— talkingcat, Feb 17, 2010
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getting looks
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