Conscious Play (revised)

I am .... wonderful write Stefan ... really loved this one love and hugs Jayne-Chloe

Beautiful poem. Nice flow and content. Just lovely Stefan. Just one wee suggestion: As we build our world we lose wisdom {We all one by birth} Perhaps this would read better as:(we're or we are) The never ending Now The power of being The “I AM” xena465

The "I am that I am" in the 'false reality of time' weaving our own existence. Profound. Love your work Stefan. Judy

Ann of Norway Some conscious some unconscious. "We catch ourselves Weaving “reality” in the inner space of the mind" I love this beginning as most of the time we are unaware of ourselves unless we are so self-conscious that we cannot even give ourselves time to think at all. And what weavings we could put on display in the attics of our minds, the exhibition would be a resounding success and so varied as to be impossible to grasp as a whole. The East tries to discard the I, and yet we keep coming back to find it there or us there as opposed to another I, or the you. Such worlds we live in, the conscious and the semiconscious, as the opposite would be the unconscious and there is not thought there! We are not always aware of which we find ourselves in at any given moment as we seem to pendulate between them don't we, however we look at it. Thought inspiring you always are Stefan

"The network of thoughts, the energy field of play The notion of creation, the building block of the soul We play the game, dividing the oneness of time." tasty list you got there... this poem looks real nice, rolls off your tongue, and the rhythm is ideal for it's message.