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Palestine

dying is a good word
when you think about it
you might have just missed it on
the six o clock news
but it wasn't your problem or mine
so we switched channels and forgot
Abraham,J oshua, Mohammad, the prophets,
the Israelis, the Assyrians ,the Persians,
the Greeks, the Romans,  the Turks ,  the Arabs
and Jesus shed blood,  within  io,ooo miles of

Palestine, 
 that place I'm so  tired of hearing about
because there's only one significance for a bullet
and that's when you taste it
the sting of lead and blood
the heat of the ground jumping 
 away from your feet and screaming
into the  crumbling buildings - it's not that you feel death
you only feel life more when it leaves you
or those you love
but you bury yourself in a dusty hole in a land
where hate replaces hope

the gun ships above are indiscriminate
and if you are lucky just ear drums will explode
and deafen you
and children will die quickly in Palestine
in the artillery barrage and not suffer for hours
with their skulls half blown off.
because they're born Arab

how dare we bitch about  the price of a Starbucks latte
or stuff our selves with those empty platitudes
when the earth is red with blood

can I love a Jew when my dying daughter
with burning bloody  metal cries out
that's what he told me

for every dead Jew  i will kill a thousand
of the innocent
and the innocent kill the innocent

that's what it means
my family is dead and I will die

because you sleep so well
and dream so long 
America
of the civilized   nations
your justice is irrelevant
— Orphani, Feb 21, 2010

Critiques

Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear B

I am sorry I have nothing intelligent to say tonight the heat has zapped all my thoughts away ... brilliant write but thats becoming expected of you these days eh ??;) Hugs and love Jayne-Chloe x x
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 3 months ago

Barry!

THese are the type of posts that should circulate as emails in response to hate mail that so often does the round!~THanks for showing your stars and designating who should get stripes again. Boni
ID

Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

How dare we, indeed, Barry

how dare we bitch about the price of a Starbucks latte or stuff our selves with those empty platitudes when the earth is red with blood how true these lines... My grandfather was a soldier in WWII, my grandmother lived in a country that was bombed and lost her fiance to the beast called war... there is no such thing as a war for peace. Every war is about the innocent dying and bleeding and losing loved ones. Yours, ~Nina
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

As we spoke, I am forwarding

As we spoke, I am forwarding this poem to my Middle East Peace Forum and 4 Palestine. My new signature line: "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti Thank you, we are ever on the same page, my Beloved.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

Palestine...

You are so right in every way! Great work! ~ Gee
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

End all suffering

Ann of Norway This is terrific, so well put, I will not discuss it, but I do feel it, and we 'have-it-so-good' without even recognising that we do, at least some of us don't. Each day our minds wander to those places of suffering and try to send out waves of sympathy and compassion whichever side one is on, I like the Krishnamurti quote there Anna, that fits here doesn't it? Hans Børli the Norwegian poet said it well, as regards owning land. It may be me who translated so as longo say 'kinda.' "WE OWN THE FORESTS." I never owned a tree. None of my people have ever owned a tree - though my family's life-path winds over centuries' blue heights of forest. Forest in storm, forest in calm - forest, forest, forest, through all the years. My people were always a poor people. Always, Children of life's hard, iron-frosted nights. Strangers own the trees, and the soil, the stone-heaped soil my fathers cleared by the light of the moon's lamp. Strangers with smooth faces and pretty hands and their car always waiting outside the door. None of my people have ever owned a tree. And yet we own the forests by our blood's red right. Rich man, you with the car and the bankbook and stock in the Borregaard timber company: you can buy a thousand acres of forest, and a thousand acres more, but you can't buy the sunset or the whisper of the wind or the joy of walking homeward when the heather blooms along the path - No, WE own the forests, the way a child owns its mother. Amen. Ann .

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