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Your Loving Hand

Your loving hand, it led my way to comfront through its grace.
Your loving hand, it led my day into a sweeter place.
Among your trust, you gave me warmth and sheltered all my worth.
Your loving hand, it had a plan, a plan for my rebirth.

Your loving hand, it touched my heart, and fled me from my shame,
into a view that shined anew, like sunrays through the pane.
Among your glow I came to know a love so filled with song.
Your loving hand, it found my own, and guided me along.

A loving hand, it came to me, equipped with so much more.
A loving hand to help me find new hope to be instore.
A loving hand, with all its charms, a woman's hand so kind.
A loving hand that reached for mine, that's what I came to find.

Your loving hand beyond my dreams, but like one much the same.
Bestowed on me a grip to be, so true and not in vain.
Along the path I come to terms with all in which you've done.
Your loving hand confirms the truth, through love I have begun.
— old friend of kurt, Feb 24, 2010

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talkingcat

16 years 3 months ago

isnt it sweet how

isnt it sweet how spirituality and sexuality swing like that?! positive, graceful poem, thanks! its nice to know a poets heart is lighting up somewhere at the genesis of this poem
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old friend of kurt

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks so much!!

Thanks so much for both reading and commenting on this. I like to try and express all different kinds of emotions in my poems, and in this one I decided to try for that Utopian lover's effect...the beginnings of a truly harmonious relationship. So very glad you found this one of interest, and worthwhile. Most sincerely, old friend of kurt
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Wonderful

I realy like your work you know. It flows smoothly and has a story behind it. I read with the enthusiam you share of the same thing. Look for more of your lovely writes. magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
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old friend of kurt

16 years 3 months ago

I sincerely thank you

I feel honored by your wonderful comments. So very glad that you enjoyed this one and felt the emotion. Your compliments are highly appreciated. I tried to make this to read inspirational, but also as real to life as I could. It's just a thought of mine about experiencing the beauties in a situation like that. I look forward to reading and commenting on your writes, as well. Very sincerely, old friend of kurt
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Your welcome

You know sometimes I am so drawn to certain writers and this is one of them. I can connect to and share the same qualities you have in your writings. Keep up the good work and look forward to reading much more of you. Kindly, magics02 x0x0x0 "Determination Brings Success"

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