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Little Puppy
Her cruel hand slapped Jeanie’s head,
her mother yelled the daily chores.
`Scrub, wash; clean, dust,
and don’t forget the doors`.
Jeanie stumbled and fell to the floor,
she struggled to hide her streaming tears.
The cruelty from her mother,
Jeanie endured it for many years.
One day as Jeanie was shopping,
she saw something very queer.
A sack on the ground was moving,
she froze, quivering in fear.
Suddenly she heard a whimper,
she thought it sounded like a pup.
When she opened the dirty sack,
she bent down to pick it up.
The little dog was skeletal and scruffy,
Jeanie’s heart missed a beat.
The pup looked into her loving eyes;
poor little mite collapsed at her feet.
She lifted him tenderly to her breast,
softly she whispered into his shabby ears.
`Please don’t die dear little pup`,
and stirred to my falling tears!
She concealed him in her room,
but her mother heard him bark.
She threw the puppy in the cellar.
The wicked witch left him in the dark.
Her love for the puppy gave her courage.
She finally stood up to her mother’s rage.
Smiling Jeannie envisioned her future.
Turning her life over, a new page
All the while in the gloomy basement,
the little puppy lay alone in thought.
He wondered what was to become of him.
poor puppy felt miserable and distraught.
When the door to the cellar opened,
his ravenous body trembled in fear.
But then he heard a familiar voice,
`my poor little Puppy, come here`.
Critiques
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Love it Rosina. We often
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Judy…A little
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Fixed it…thanks…grammar
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I always appreciatate help.
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I read your prayer…it was
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Great to see you back Xena
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks…good
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Amen to that one Indi
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Got my magic boots on…Now
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Okay now tap your way to heaven
Mariposa
16 years 3 months ago
Wow!
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
That was intentional so that
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
My puppy in the basement
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks so much…is rather
Roscoe Lane
16 years 3 months ago
love it
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Me too. I love all animals.
Mariposa
16 years 3 months ago
Later as I was thinking about it, the ending fit perfectly.
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I’m not telling you if
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Ann of Norway“Jeanie
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Ta much Ann…I’ve made
arja
16 years 3 months ago
…oh wow! :)
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks…I take it you quite
arja
16 years 3 months ago
…its such a touching
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks…poor wee Puppy…
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Rosina
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Yes for this wee puppy there
jim
16 years 3 months ago
I love this
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you so very much
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
First read of the morning!!I
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks vix…so nice to hear
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
Its has been my pleasure,
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
And it’s a pleasure to
Ammus
16 years 3 months ago
ammusReally nice and so
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks. It’s a nice poem
Ammus
16 years 3 months ago
ammusHow can I share?
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
You’re already sharing
arja
16 years 3 months ago
…and I’m back to
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Well said. Thanks for the
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