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Changes...

electricy running through my body
enebling me to see optically

twenty twenty

the doctors gotta be paid with cash money
otherwise he can be stoppin me
which aint funny

so i disguise my lies to get through the battery
so it dont shatter me

through the plys big in size
still id rather be getting blizted

materanly getting kissed
motherly love is the best
and gotta be gettin it

a mommas boy forbidden of it
shitty ending like tales from the cript

a sad ending for the sails on the ship
getting older de railes all the kids

and i aint forgettin it

so im sippin on some captian morgans
feelin dazed like a morman

its a craze making me dormant
in a haze layin on the floor and
the rain is pourin

emotions making me enormous

the feeling afterwards is always gergous

gotta always be ahead of the heard
to get in the fortress with less stress

its absurd thinkin the floors aint a mess
step through the doors and realise the rest

or ill use a sword to split ya chest

simlar to religious
sucess
thinkin they the best
its a show stoppin when in the nest

so i confess i dont digest that acid
it makes life morbid

so when eatin chicken i like pure corn fed
finger lickin with home made
not store bread

ginger pickin for my tea
making it tatse gingerly
not figurativly

frantically i convert protiens into energy
cause im a pro fiend when it comes to smokin weed

gotta be healthy no matter how wealthy  indeed
— mdehe, Mar 02, 2010

Critiques

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BrightEyed

16 years 3 months ago

this is amazing

i really like your style. its much different from what i usually read. i like your content too. cant wait to read more. -great job, bright eyed
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mdehe

16 years 3 months ago

thanks

a lot. appreciate the good words.

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