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Mar 02, 2010
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electricy running through my body
enebling me to see optically
twenty twenty
the doctors gotta be paid with cash money
otherwise he can be stoppin me
which aint funny
so i disguise my lies to get through the battery
so it dont shatter me
through the plys big in size
still id rather be getting blizted
materanly getting kissed
motherly love is the best
and gotta be gettin it
a mommas boy forbidden of it
shitty ending like tales from the cript
a sad ending for the sails on the ship
getting older de railes all the kids
and i aint forgettin it
so im sippin on some captian morgans
feelin dazed like a morman
its a craze making me dormant
in a haze layin on the floor and
the rain is pourin
emotions making me enormous
the feeling afterwards is always gergous
gotta always be ahead of the heard
to get in the fortress with less stress
its absurd thinkin the floors aint a mess
step through the doors and realise the rest
or ill use a sword to split ya chest
simlar to religious
sucess
thinkin they the best
its a show stoppin when in the nest
so i confess i dont digest that acid
it makes life morbid
so when eatin chicken i like pure corn fed
finger lickin with home made
not store bread
ginger pickin for my tea
making it tatse gingerly
not figurativly
frantically i convert protiens into energy
cause im a pro fiend when it comes to smokin weed
gotta be healthy no matter how wealthy indeed
enebling me to see optically
twenty twenty
the doctors gotta be paid with cash money
otherwise he can be stoppin me
which aint funny
so i disguise my lies to get through the battery
so it dont shatter me
through the plys big in size
still id rather be getting blizted
materanly getting kissed
motherly love is the best
and gotta be gettin it
a mommas boy forbidden of it
shitty ending like tales from the cript
a sad ending for the sails on the ship
getting older de railes all the kids
and i aint forgettin it
so im sippin on some captian morgans
feelin dazed like a morman
its a craze making me dormant
in a haze layin on the floor and
the rain is pourin
emotions making me enormous
the feeling afterwards is always gergous
gotta always be ahead of the heard
to get in the fortress with less stress
its absurd thinkin the floors aint a mess
step through the doors and realise the rest
or ill use a sword to split ya chest
simlar to religious
sucess
thinkin they the best
its a show stoppin when in the nest
so i confess i dont digest that acid
it makes life morbid
so when eatin chicken i like pure corn fed
finger lickin with home made
not store bread
ginger pickin for my tea
making it tatse gingerly
not figurativly
frantically i convert protiens into energy
cause im a pro fiend when it comes to smokin weed
gotta be healthy no matter how wealthy indeed
— mdehe, Mar 02, 2010
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BrightEyed
16 years 3 months ago
this is amazing
mdehe
16 years 3 months ago
thanks
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