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Mar 05, 2010
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The Big Sister
Its Really good to have a little brother. He’s got the same parents as me.I give him lots he can take it.You know how little brothers can be.He follows me around like a shadow.Thinks He’s tougher than me.Its Really Good To Have A Little Brother.He’s got the same parents as me. Yeah its really good to have a little brother.Copies everything that I do.And now that I’ve got heaps of friends.He tries to make more too.Its really good to have a little brother.He’s got the same parents as me. Now My Sister Shelly. Its really good to have a little sister.Too me she’s like a best friend.When I’m all alone and neglected.She comes around to the mend.She follows me around like I can’t see her.She must think I’m dumb.But when I Thrash her in Monopoly She goes and has a sob to Mum.Its really good to have a little sister.Who I can thrash in Monopoly. Mmm, Its really good to have a little sister.Always nicking off with my stuff.She has to ask me before she takes it.But she says ‘ You only think your tough.’She slips over backwards starts sobbing.Serves The Little sneak right.Its really good to have a little sister.Always nicking off with my stuff.And I love my little brother and sister.More than you could see.I’m really glad were related.Because they have the same parents as me.
— Pitbull, Mar 05, 2010
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xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Sounds to me like you like
Pitbull
16 years 3 months ago
Haha
Pitbull
16 years 2 months ago
Im A PRO
loved
16 years 2 months ago
nice
loved
16 years 2 months ago
nice
xraycat
16 years 2 months ago
so true! im one of six, and
Pitbull
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
I love this poem story
Breakinglogic
15 years 12 months ago
Hey Pitbull, this write
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