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The Big Sister

   Its Really good to have a little brother. He’s got the same parents as me.I give him lots he can take it.You know how little brothers can be.He follows me around like a shadow.Thinks He’s tougher than me.Its Really Good To Have A Little Brother.He’s got the same  parents as me. Yeah its really good to have a little brother.Copies everything that I do.And now that I’ve got heaps of friends.He tries to make more too.Its really good to have a little brother.He’s got the same parents as me. Now My Sister Shelly. Its really good to have a little sister.Too me she’s like a best friend.When I’m all alone and neglected.She comes around to the mend.She follows me around like I can’t see her.She must think I’m dumb.But when I Thrash her in Monopoly She goes and has a sob to Mum.Its really good to have a little sister.Who I can thrash in Monopoly. Mmm, Its really good to have a little sister.Always nicking off with my stuff.She has to ask me before she takes it.But she says ‘ You only think your tough.’She slips over backwards starts sobbing.Serves The Little sneak right.Its really good to have a little sister.Always nicking off with my stuff.And I love my little brother and sister.More than you could see.I’m really glad were related.Because they have the same parents as me. 
— Pitbull, Mar 05, 2010

Critiques

xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Sounds to me like you like

Sounds to me like you like being the boss. But as you like having a little sister and brother, I'm sure you're not all bad...Are you Pitbull? Rosina xena465
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Pitbull

16 years 3 months ago

Haha

Nah Im Not All That Bad.. You Know They Just Get On Your Nerves Sometimes,, Cos They Are Jealous Of My World Wide Singin Profession.. Haha Im In Miami Pitbull MmChWaa
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Pitbull

16 years 2 months ago

Im A PRO

Hehe :) I Win
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

nice

Nice siblings poem how i wish i had thought of it before [urpoem] as i had 12 siblings more how can i say now they all have gone and we are now three no less no more LOVED BY ALL
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

nice

Nice siblings poem how i wish i had thought of it before [urpoem] as i had 12 siblings more how can i say now they all have gone and we are now three no less no more LOVED BY ALL
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Pitbull

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks

Thanks. I'd Love To Read Some Of Yours Sometime. MmChWaA <3 Pitbull - Otra Otra Noche Otra
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

I love this poem story

Hello and nice to come along your write here. By the way you look like Frank Sinatra when he was young. I love the pic as much as I love this poem. tell me now how many people in your lifetime have told you that and do you sing like him too? lol will visit again Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
Breakinglogic

Breakinglogic

15 years 12 months ago

Hey Pitbull, this write

Hey Pitbull, this write reminds me of my best friend, :) anyways, I enjoyed it. Reveals the relationship of big brother to little brother and sister quite well. Your little sister sounds just like mine. See ya around peace an cheers, logic

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