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R.M.Shanmugam
Mar 06, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Value decline in nearness.

The Taj Mahal to its gardener has no charm.

The idol to its priest has no awe.

A graceful wife to her husband has no lure.

Why must he be in search of a pretty wife?

21.03.2001, Pmdi  
— R.M.Shanmugam, Mar 06, 2010
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Lunegirl

16 years 3 months ago

So very true for many! great

So very true for many! great little piece for a thought of the day vix Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Why indeed do they look

Why indeed do they look elsewhere ... good Poem Shan I liked your message Love and hugs Jayne-Chloe

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