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Mar 08, 2010
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Down by the river
Observe the wind rattling
through dry bamboo
the sepia clouds
reflected in stark water
the fish clinging
to sullen rocks
everything waiting for some
change in the weather
either the acceleration of winter
or something warmer
like the perspiration of the man
driving a stake into the ground
his efforts echoing through
squat houses with blue roofs
arousing deserted pylons
whose wires are suddenly
smokestacks unraveling in the wind
wild cranes rising in the steel sky.
— Heading South, Mar 08, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Hello. So glad to read
Heading South
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Anna,
Seren
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Daniel
Heading South
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Jayne
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