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Winter Lights

Winter lights
Light frozen routes.
Open spaces,
Fill with men in suits.
Streets fill
and quickly empty.
The city’s beauty:
Stained by glory.
— evie.haywood, Mar 08, 2010

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poewriter58

16 years 3 months ago

Evie

Your title drew me to your poem. You have a very unique way of writing choppy but it works I only have one word for this poem MORE (please) Chrys

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