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FRIENDSHIP
Kikut shone like a jewel just out of reach,
like you there on the shores of life's great oceans habits
schooled in shoals of books from library shelves,
we kid ourselves we know, we know the why
and yet we cry in knowledge not enlightened,
as the human needs are supple soft and tried,
they stiffen in the morning sun then ripen
when we least expect the moon to turn the tide,
and there on shores of desolate abandon
learn deeper sorrows, lifted by the flow of flotsam jetsam,
thrown about when winds begin to blow.
We do not know, we never know
all life is full of learning
when not to go, when not to do,
when not to even stir a limb
we seek, we reap, we sow again our wisdom limited and green,
and yet we find a way, our own and not what others say, is done,
its ours uniquely spun on rows of prayer wheels turning, ever turning
reaching what we feel, another sense of zeal,
as riches pour from where we know not
give us joys we never dreamed of,
sadness and despair unthought of, life's just what we are
so try to see the shining blue beyond the clouds of falling dew,
for you have me and I have you and that's the greatest gift,
the one that sea swells lift on high and make our senses shout and fly,
in ever bright white light, the warmth of friendship
in the ovens burnt, a glaze on life's dull pot, without the dirt and soot.
Critiques
yenti
16 years 3 months ago
Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
What does one answer to that?
Lonnie
16 years 3 months ago
Beautiful, poignant Poetry!
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Oh do you really wear a hat Lonnie?
lyz
16 years 3 months ago
A shedded tear.
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
How happy you make us feel to see you back,
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
Friendship...
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Og good Sir Gee
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
My darlin Ann you have hands
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
You are just something else
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
big hugs annanya
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Yes have you done that?
pamela
16 years 3 months ago
your pen
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
WOW PAMELA!!
loved
16 years 3 months ago
ma'am
loved
16 years 3 months ago
MA'AM
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
You flatter me, a non schooled 'poet' as I am,
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