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My Broken Rib

I left my Eden

To till a garden

Of weeds and reed

 But no fruitful seed.

 

She was woven

Out of me for me.

But I left her broken

Like glass from a height.

 

I made her a token

Like a dead fish frozen

In the deep of the ocean

I let her crush.

 

My stint with the wild flowers

Fell like Sennacherib

And I searched for my Cherub

For she had my rib.

 

I found her broken

But I mended her

With echoes of my heart

Words spoken with love.

 

After years of mess

I am relieved of my stress

And I am in my full dress

Of love pure and serene

 

My broken rib

Back in my abode

I breathe with no pain

Because I am made whole


— jabuu, Mar 19, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Africa/Ghana/Kumasi, GHA

Favorite Poets: Oswald Mtshali, John Donne, Lord Byron

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jabuu

16 years 2 months ago

Thanx

i will soon show my lovely face so dont worry.
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Beautiful

Warm words and an enjoyable read. XX

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