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Mar 24, 2010
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the girl who seemed...
the girl who seemed unbreakable, broke-
the girl who seemed so strong, shattered-
the girl who always laughed, cried-
the girl who never stoped trying, gave up-
the girl who lived life to the fullest ,killed herself-
the girl who seemed so strong, shattered-
the girl who always laughed, cried-
the girl who never stoped trying, gave up-
the girl who lived life to the fullest ,killed herself-
— Dark.Poetress, Mar 24, 2010
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mdehe
16 years 2 months ago
I
Dark.Poetress
16 years 2 months ago
thanks it was just made up
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