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Mandatory allegiance to our nation
numbing of our senses , deadening of our pain , dealing with humanity is twisting up my brain. were experts at excuses , were quick to place the blame , our leaders have no morals , were spiraling down the drain. 24/7 reality will make a man insane. so set back and take a toke and don't play their fucking game. were in such an imposition to diagnose our on prescription , because the side effects of their medication , trys to control the population our government is to blame , we see so many fatality's because were not free to escape reality , so rise up and don't climb aboard their fucking train. lets get dazed for personal gratification, it paves the way for self salvation , because the leaders of our nation think they know whats best for our generation , so fire it up it may not be the answer , but sure helps with the pressure to deal with life these days.
Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
You voted for them, or worse, didn't.
Roscoe Lane
16 years 2 months ago
Don't need.
stavroula
16 years 2 months ago
fun poem, definitely got
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
Now tell me this doesn't read better
redhill49
16 years 2 months ago
reads alot better
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