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WHO KNOW'S.........................................

So here i am writing! to you ,to the world.
Do i give a shit what you think?
Let's be honest,what you think carries no weight.

I  am human,i am me,who are you?
Would you even know,even while looking in a mirror.
When will the world realize they are fucked?

Yes face it. things are tough and we deal with it.
Government means nothing,you mean nothing!
Is death easier than life? i would say yes.

This is drunk writing and im sure it shows.
But guess what,i could give a shit less.
Kiss my ass ! ..but i love you all. tommorow will carry new thoughts..
— thewaitingroom, Mar 25, 2010

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 2 months ago

You have hit the nail,

You have hit the nail on the head, drunk or not. Life is very important,to you and fellow man. Government is rich men playing games the way their fathers did. We are only pawns in a giant board game,if only people realized we have to take their power away. Anyway it's good what you wrote, and i'm sure we'll hear from you again. Be always on the positive, Regards Roscoe...
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thewaitingroom

16 years 2 months ago

THANKS ALOT!! Much

THANKS ALOT!! Much appreciated.I realized this morning ,how drunk i was while writing this craziness.lol thanks again.
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 2 months ago

Hey there Billy...

Well ...there it is there! You know what really helps in the morning? Vitamin B12-Sublingual...to refresh those nerves in 30 seconds! Good poem! Here's my favorite line: "Is death easier than life? i would say yes." I love this line! (It's so true!) I really enjoyed your poem...It brought a much appreciated smile. Ciao Billy. Raven

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