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Mar 25, 2010
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WHO KNOW'S.........................................
So here i am writing! to you ,to the world.
Do i give a shit what you think?
Let's be honest,what you think carries no weight.
I am human,i am me,who are you?
Would you even know,even while looking in a mirror.
When will the world realize they are fucked?
Yes face it. things are tough and we deal with it.
Government means nothing,you mean nothing!
Is death easier than life? i would say yes.
This is drunk writing and im sure it shows.
But guess what,i could give a shit less.
Kiss my ass ! ..but i love you all. tommorow will carry new thoughts..
Do i give a shit what you think?
Let's be honest,what you think carries no weight.
I am human,i am me,who are you?
Would you even know,even while looking in a mirror.
When will the world realize they are fucked?
Yes face it. things are tough and we deal with it.
Government means nothing,you mean nothing!
Is death easier than life? i would say yes.
This is drunk writing and im sure it shows.
But guess what,i could give a shit less.
Kiss my ass ! ..but i love you all. tommorow will carry new thoughts..
— thewaitingroom, Mar 25, 2010
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Roscoe Lane
16 years 2 months ago
You have hit the nail,
thewaitingroom
16 years 2 months ago
THANKS ALOT!! Much
Ravenshakti
16 years 2 months ago
Hey there Billy...
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