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dark woods: a vagabond poet's donation

why words?
why sacrifice words for
truth and truth for love and love
for words?

why give anything?  why take what is 'yours'?
why obfuscate faith with the mirage of shadows, rummage
through insouciant hope?
why pick up scraps of sentience while throwing out nuance, incomplete and
incontinent verbosity?

break sweet the bone, you over there!

Absurd.

forlorn testaments of fidelity, increduality;
we are words ear-marked with absurdity, vexations
of the heart
pathways
where the brave already exist
silently listening to the wind passing through four directions
and twelve stations of the cross, seven heavens
of imagination

why is there three of anything?
where are we when we're not here?
who are we if not the broken light?

only the sacred
pine grove, arching the sky into patterns
can hear
the sound of one tree falling







— Kailashana, Mar 27, 2010

Critiques

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raskin

16 years 2 months ago

I don’t think you meant

I don't think you meant this as funny but unfortunately I took it this way on my first read through. "Silently listening to the wind passing through the four directions" I got a picture of wind whistling through your ears. It's interesting your mixing different disciplines of religion here. raskin
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Yes I did, humour is always

Yes I did, humour is always in my poetry. Especially my verbal-diarrhea kind. It's always reconstituted shit. ~A smile. Words must be used like stepping stones: lightly and with nimbleness, because if you step on them too heavily, you incur the danger of falling into the intellectual mire of logic and reason. - Balsekar
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

I believe that there is only

I believe that there is only one of us to begin with, not two, three or more. We should be the ones to decide to invite others to share our words/world, and if they don't like what they read or feel, then `Let It Be`...I'm hoping I understood what you meant...great write. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Mum

You may have written this one laced with humour but these words are just Beautys only the sacred pine grove, arching the sky into patterns can hear the sound of one tree falling loved this one love and hugs JayCee x x x
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Verbal diarrhea any day

Missy wordsmith you, lol. I must be behind in mind today because I cant find the humor, lol, only the question, why. Apart from that, great, and the rapidness got me. Lol. Brilliant. XX

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