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Mar 28, 2010
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Summer Romance
Laughing on the beach,
Running from the waves.
Falling in his arms,
As night comes and you shiver.
Everything is perfect,
He says that you’re beautiful,
You hadn’t realised:
He’s got a girlfriend waiting at home.
Summer romances are for summer,
The beaches and the swimsuits.
These are your mother’s words
As she tries to be a comfort.
And summer doesn’t last forever,
Eventually fall will come.
And the waves will sweep away that beach.
And the memories that lived along.
Running from the waves.
Falling in his arms,
As night comes and you shiver.
Everything is perfect,
He says that you’re beautiful,
You hadn’t realised:
He’s got a girlfriend waiting at home.
Summer romances are for summer,
The beaches and the swimsuits.
These are your mother’s words
As she tries to be a comfort.
And summer doesn’t last forever,
Eventually fall will come.
And the waves will sweep away that beach.
And the memories that lived along.
— evie.haywood, Mar 28, 2010
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magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Evie this is great gal
evie.haywood
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks everyone.
Mariposa
16 years 2 months ago
We've all been there!
pamela
16 years 2 months ago
Dear E., Great job. I
evie.haywood
16 years 2 months ago
Jhena, glad I Could bring
ifoundaplace
16 years 2 months ago
This is beautiful
evie.haywood
16 years 2 months ago
Thankyou. :) And may I say
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