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chrisbyrne
Mar 31, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Small moves

Breath slow. move in time.
In. Out, so hard to trace.
Love the change, mind. No place!

I am me, you can see.
Want, lust, need.
I exist in breath outside space.

Move in time, all is well.
Cold fact can shape;
All the forms to come.

I love life, time indeed.
need, forfill, centre. See.
Flowing out, I am me!


— chrisbyrne, Mar 31, 2010

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Draki

16 years 2 months ago

I like this straight away

I like this straight away for it's simplicity and compactness. It's just about being, or at least a being's experience of being! I didn't realise until after a few reads that you were meant to be conveying the essence of tai-chi, but I was put in mind of Buddhist philosophy, and the Tao, so you conveyed well. I suppose I'm trying to say something relevant, when really I just simply really liked this, and I think I got it. foresee/fulfill = forfill = create your own reality : manifest destiny.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 1 month ago

Small Moves

Chris Well this is me also, think alike. But i feel on the outside looking in again longing to be part of something - someone. Yes I am me - but what is me? Electric Blue
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chrisbyrne

16 years 1 month ago

you are you

Its been a while since we talked, by electric ways. I feel a likeness and a relaxed exchange within our messages, lets agree to work on this and widen the flow of words and feelings. Thanks for looking at my stuff and thanks for being just as you are. X

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