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The Humane Mind

The Humane Mind

 

A man anatomically,

Can utilise only

The left side of his brain

its  scientific and logical

Each half,
one at a time

 

A woman,,

Exercises the right side of her brain

More
but that's only  emotional.

She can and also does exercise

Both sides simultaneously

Albeit in theory ,
unlike men...

 

What would you term a human being?

Who can exercise the mind,

Both halves of the dissected brain

Scientifically, artistically and emotionally

concurrently

Of course also in an adept manner

 

Will you term that person as a BI?

We all have

Testosterones and oestrogen

within us,

Albeit to varying degrees...

 

So broaden your minds and be human
Exercise both halves
With gay abandon

No not gay,

As in  lesbian...

Now what am I?

As Loved,

Can any one tell me?

 

 

COPYRIGHTED  LOVED AND LOVELY

— loved, Apr 01, 2010

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judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

well written

well done i like this loved 'So broaden your minds and be human Exercise both halves of your brains With gay abandon' love judy
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thank you ma'am

ur expression of appreciation is extraordinary thanks. loved
P

pamela

16 years 2 months ago

Dear L., very

Dear L., very enlightened. I loved it. P.
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

THANKS MIND

THANKS 2 U U UUUUU U HAVE APPLIED UR MIND THATS WHAT I WISH WE ALL DO PAMELA U HAVE NO PROFILE HOW DO I ADD U AS BUDDY LOVED
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Loved

thought provoking I like that in poetry love Jaycee
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

THOUGHTS

Your thought is all I seek, As we all apply our mind We all must ourselves About we must keep, When it touches our kind Thanks for the read You are wonderful In deed indeed Loved
L

lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Loved

Very informative write, made me smile. Well done. Lyz. XX
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks SMILY

Ur smile is worth a million human minds loved
TS

The Seeker

16 years 2 months ago

A great poem

what a wonderful description feelings to think about along the image of thought. " Our ever excitable minds with our own self-definitions " The Seeker
M

magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Loved

My comment disappeared what happen to it? LOL great poem gal Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

over the week end i shall post my masterpiece a challenge poem of a fairt tale romance thanks loved have a good day
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

Yeh well I have my theory!!

Ann of Norway Not telling! A conundrum. "Albeit to varying contents".......this is just a bit odd in its presentation of meaning, quibbling about the details am I? "As in lesbian or homosapien." A strange juxtaposition! Homo Sapiens are US. "Can utilise only The left side of his brain" A bit paradoxical? When just afterwards you say he uses both! We are all BI's, or the opposite simultaneously, therefore we are human- Homo Sapiens, whether we like it or not. Ann!!!
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

CONFUSED

THIS comment of urs confuses me sorry .ma'am
Z

ziggy

16 years 2 months ago

hi

to be honest i don`t know what to say about this one , its not grabbing me but that could just be me ,,zigs
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

human mind

when one has a choice one should ignore its ok then relieves all the tensions much more. loved
TS

The Seeker

16 years 2 months ago

I have reading it again

and i have to think about this book ,:-) " Why Men Can Only Do One Thing at a Time Women Never Stop Talking ." Allan Pease, Barbara Pease

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