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The Humane Mind
The Humane Mind
A man anatomically,
Can utilise only
The left side of his brain
its scientific and logical
Each half,
one at a time
A woman,,
Exercises the right side of her brain
More
but that's only emotional.
She can and also does exercise
Both sides simultaneously
Albeit in theory ,
unlike men...
What would you term a human being?
Who can exercise the mind,
Both halves of the dissected brain
Scientifically, artistically and emotionally
concurrently
Of course also in an adept manner
Will you term that person as a BI?
We all have
Testosterones and oestrogen
within us,
Albeit to varying degrees...
So broaden your minds and be human
Exercise both halves
With gay abandon
No not gay,
As in lesbian...
Now what am I?
As Loved,
Can any one tell me?
COPYRIGHTED LOVED AND LOVELY
Critiques
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
well written
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thank you ma'am
pamela
16 years 2 months ago
Dear L., very
loved
16 years 2 months ago
THANKS MIND
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Loved
loved
16 years 2 months ago
THOUGHTS
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Loved
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks SMILY
The Seeker
16 years 2 months ago
A great poem
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks seeking
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Loved
loved
16 years 2 months ago
recomment
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Yeh well I have my theory!!
loved
16 years 2 months ago
CONFUSED
ziggy
16 years 2 months ago
hi
loved
16 years 2 months ago
human mind
The Seeker
16 years 2 months ago
I have reading it again
loved
16 years 2 months ago
very nice
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