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mantiscepter
Apr 02, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Seasons All.

 I'd love to be 
a leaf of green
on stem in open field

To bend in winds
The seasons all
Dance in summer rains
To me that fall

just merrily bob
As  waving hand
Host butterflies on breeze

Through flowered meadows
These grassy hills
A joining all are free

Who then would rise
In beauties glow
A temptress faithful

Our dreams we sow.


— mantiscepter, Apr 02, 2010

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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Spring.

I Know, I felt sorta whimsical, yesterday, and the spring bug still has me in it's grasp. And i'M happy to see you out and about. I've been in hot correspondence, with Lyz the last couple of weeks, and I found out she is just as bad as I am on the computer, that's funny. I need to stop jabbering, it's early and this will be the first chance I've had to review other's poems so hope you liked this one and will talk soon Love John. Lots of hugs.
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Dear John

To envision is to be a part of it. This is beautiful and vivid. Love 3rd stanza. Love Lyz. XX

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