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Exorcising a nightmare
when a dream seeped
into a dome of light,
I was already leaping
with tale of grand sights
I was falling into
days consciousness
but a demonic spell
had begun to possess
in a depth of sleep
in the quietest dark,
I felt a presence
slide to make a spark
a nightmare of jowls
shadowed his face,
then his slimy fingers
stuck into my grace
he took my thoughts
on a hellish ride,
I was hoping my mind
didn't burst open wide
the torture of angels
struggling on the racks,
was matched by the faeries
whip-marks on their backs
the mushrooms of love
had fungus and warts,
a cathedral of dreams
slipped out of all thought
with unicorns hobbled
and chains on their legs,
the elves head bandages
held together with pegs
the beautiful sights
I had run back to tell,
was lost in a nightmare
as I was living in hell
but endless this horror
well, it wasn't to be,
as I write this poem
that dream is set free
but that's not to say
that it wont return,
as I sleep in the night
dreams start to burn
Critiques
CyberSpace
16 years 2 months ago
you have the wildest dreams
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Oh I am so biting my tongue
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Why did you remove your
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dale sometimes our time is
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
every now and then I get
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Exorcising or exercising?
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
I found this good fun and
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Jayne
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
wow
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
You exorcist of the attics of fantasy
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks to all for the read
yenti
16 years 2 months ago
Jayne
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
and you know me too well lol
yenti
16 years 2 months ago
Little Lady
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
It sounds like a peaceful
club special
16 years 2 months ago
Remember you wake from a
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Brian Thanks for the
paparazii
16 years 2 months ago
Beautful
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
No such thing as the
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