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Apr 08, 2010
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Horrid.
Curl,
Glistening, shiney appendage,
Dangling there in the midst of that porcelain white forehead,
Bouncing tantalisingly, waiting to be noticed..
Just like she is.
She, so perfect in her fluffy pinkness,
So rounded in her curvaceous silhouette,
Framing that naughty little curl,
Like the naughty little girl,
That she is..
Even when she tried to be good,
Boy was she HORRID!
Glistening, shiney appendage,
Dangling there in the midst of that porcelain white forehead,
Bouncing tantalisingly, waiting to be noticed..
Just like she is.
She, so perfect in her fluffy pinkness,
So rounded in her curvaceous silhouette,
Framing that naughty little curl,
Like the naughty little girl,
That she is..
Even when she tried to be good,
Boy was she HORRID!
— sharon-rose, Apr 08, 2010
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Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
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16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Cat
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