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Apr 11, 2010
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short sweet dream
Short Sweet Dream Cauliflower trees Pollinated By jellybean beesA river of sweet chocolate milk Flowing beside shores Of peanut butter fudgeCandy corn unicorns playing Hide and seekPurple striped peaches which Taste’s like moms rock candy Soft blue velvet tigers Running Upon the clouds Of yellow marshmallows BananaMountains as far As the eye can see Laughing pink penguins Indulging in Strawberry fish pudding Gram cracker houses Where the sweet tart kids live Apple pie bicycles with Candy cane forks And a liquorish sweet seats The sun made of an orangeShinning down from the yellow sky While raining green gumballs With my mouth open wide
— ucon27, Apr 11, 2010
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raskin
16 years 2 months ago
Made me laugh, a fun little
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
WoW this is brill
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