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short sweet dream

        Short Sweet Dream  Cauliflower trees Pollinated         By jellybean beesA river of sweet chocolate milk      Flowing beside shores     Of peanut butter fudgeCandy corn unicorns playing           Hide and seekPurple striped peaches which Taste’s like moms rock candy      Soft blue velvet tigers     Running Upon the clouds      Of yellow marshmallows     BananaMountains as far          As the eye can see       Laughing pink penguins            Indulging in      Strawberry fish pudding         Gram cracker houses          Where the sweet tart kids live        Apple pie bicycles with              Candy cane forks      And a liquorish sweet seats       The sun made of an orangeShinning down from the yellow sky   While raining green gumballs      With my mouth open wide 
— ucon27, Apr 11, 2010

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raskin

16 years 2 months ago

Made me laugh, a fun little

Made me laugh, a fun little confection and I thought it was great how you used all the candy to create a dream like environment. raskin
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

WoW this is brill

I love it and I'm glad to see you back with a superb write Wayne. Rosina xena465

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