Marked in a sigh

I like that image of dragonflies being your words escaping from your mouth to create poetry. Love your poem and imagination Jaycee. Rosina xena465

I love your use of language here Hun. Enjoyed the read very much. Much love Millage x

Ann of Norway This one I will have to look at as some of the words here and there could be thrown out or added to, I don' t quite know what I mean yet but will take it away and cogitate, I may be up the pole and when I re read it it will sound just perfect, but that's my first momentary impression of just this one. BUT as usual the imagery is stunning and so so so intensely surreal that the painting produced in my head is also stunning, perhaps you have inspired me to do some painting again, I have concentrated on poetry for tow years now and the paints have dried in their cups, so we shall see you wondrous spinner of word patterns-that's not the word I want, word juxtapositions-that sounds pompous- jangling- ah perhaps that better and yet its not the sounds so much as the images, so I am at a loss for the right word!!Help!!! Will return anon and refreshed by this poem, must go catch a dragonfly and explore the heavens first as the sun has come with a vengeance and scorched the tip of my tongue, so I shall return. Farewell on this day dearest , I am mad(oh I forgot the E here and that makes it stronger, this expression, what!!) happy by your poetry, it is not static, we can fly and dance and sing with it and that is so great, thank you Ann.

u all r poets out here i seem to be out of place perhaps i will benefit from u

but i absolutely love the way you say it. love judd xxx