Magician

Can you see the delight in my eyes - Can you tell it's you I am here for?Oh, to sit so close to youWith your black-clothed legSmooth against my skin
The simplest things give me pleasure - when you let me in.You lean close - With your still voice strongYour eyes deep wells of intrigue,And your seldom smile beguiles -
You enchant me, magicianCloaked in dark and silence - a world I want a part of.Will you wrap me in your mystery, Will you let me charm you some?
You are all I want, my magic manwith your eyes, your smileand your secret mind
From you, a love for me, dark oneThat turns those eyes to mine,To stare with deep intensity - to claim me as your own

— Giuliana Isabella, Apr 12, 2010

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Country/Region: ZAF

Critiques

beautiful nightmare

16 years 2 months ago

nice!

BEAUTIFUL, DARK AND INTRICATELY WOVEN X

Moloko D. Mahuma

16 years 2 months ago

Its magical

You have your way of playing with words and that's what I love the most about your poem. It's so beautiful and magical, whoever inspired this poem is indeed a magic man. Moloko

Giuliana Isabella

16 years 2 months ago

:)

Thanks so much, I really appreciate the comment! X Giuls

magics02

16 years 2 months ago

I like this poem of the magician

And your picture is mysterious but beautiful too. Look forward to your writes and welcome here to Neopoet. I will be back Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

Giuliana Isabella

16 years 2 months ago

Thank You

Thanks so much, Magics! My sister actually took the pic - she's a budding photographer :) See you round! -Giuls

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